<div align="center"> CC please, rate and/or hate! note: the girl on the right is holding a lightbulb </div>
ahh, not great man,.. no real flow, over sharpened in parts, completely monotonous, don't love the text.. not thats it's one of the tags that looks really "nooby" or anything but a lot of the crucial components weren't executed very well, also you should really have to note that the girls holdin a lightbulb, you could have taken advantage of it, makin it clear that that's what she's doing and made it somehow into a really cool lightsource, in a different way then you did. I know i sound like a dick haha, but thats critisism.. I can see from this though, that you have potential.. keep it up.
Yeah I know i hate it too, came out completely different what I actually had in mind in the first place. At first the idea was to create a 2person tag with one showing the light to the other, two flows and focals needed to be done. When making it I saw that nothing was going right and overdid the C4Ds and it start to look like a abstract mess . So I said to myself what the heck I'm just going to finish it and see where it goes . Outcome is still for the lulz Cheers!
it has nice effect... but too overkill... too many effects going everywhere, hence that's why there appears to be no flow... but nice concept nevertheless