the color is nice although the flow is not distinct or shown.... depth is decent.... effects are ok... flow is the only prob
I like it. Only two things I can think of that throws it off from being complete... 1 is the render doesn't mesh well, and the other is that it's black and white on one side, and has some color on the other. I think if those two things were fixed, it would be a really good tag.
hahahhaa the title is clever, i would say the only thing i can see needs improvement is blending in the render more