I've seen two of your tags now. They remind me of Justin's style of colouring. However, you seem to love to play random C4Ds on top of great tags. If you were going for the C4Ds are lighting than it would be best to motion blur a little and set the fill to 20-50.
The lines are out of place because it's incredibly glow-y but right next to the dark part of her. Maybe lose the lines or move it so it's a more reasonable light source? Nice tag though