So here's two pieces that I'm working on that sort of contrast each other in style. If you guys could provide some feedback and commentary, that would be awesome. Additions, eliminations, changes, love, hate, etc. are what I'm hoping to see in replies. Thanks a bunch! PS- Imageshack won't upload the second one in its original size.
Alright I'm trying to edit the light source in the render itself to coincide with a black background. I'm getting the vibe that the first one's a bit...bland. Any other suggestions?
Yeah I think I might try to completely remake the first one since I don't have any ideas on how to better it in its current state. Thanks for the replies, though! I'll definitely keep flow in mind.
