try to make more of a composition, now it looks like you just put in a zillion effects and posted it. It doens't work that way..
i was trying to make it look like a wave of c4ds rushed over him, and it all does a bottom right to a left curve..
Yea, I don't know... it is pretty "loud"... I think Neo though it's kind of hard to tell its him, feels a little out of place?