The Boys From Above

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by DutchBlood, Oct 19, 2009.

  1. DutchBlood

    DutchBlood Well-Known Member

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    My S.O.T.W. entry.

    Plz give tips how to improve and thx for looking.
     
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    this is so original, good luck with your sig in the comp man, the vintage effect that you used it very cool
    you'r name isn't on your entry though, i think thats a vital asset in the rules.
     
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    my name is in it, the black stripe on the right ;)

    you also good luck with S.O.T.W ;)
     
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    25+ view and only one reaction. Is it that bad :(
     
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    <div class='quotemain'>ah my bad, my laptop screen was at a certain angle, which made it pretty much invisible. cheers
     
  6. Proximity-HazeD

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    It's a decent tag, I like it but you have a problem.

    Depth....

    It's a smart blurring idea but your using it incorrectly. Never blur an object like you have it, then fade the blur off of it.
    Think as if it was your own sight, so this is what i want you 2 do.

    Set up an object kinda of far away like maybe 5ft-10ft then take like a pop can and put it really close to your eye.
    Focus on the object far away, you'll notice that the pop can is blurry and completely unfocused on.
    Your vision doesn't blur just the top of the pop can and allow you to focus on the bottom of it and the object in the background.

    See what I'm saying here?

    Your making it so you can focus on both the close object and the far object, its unrealistic and messes with my eye's.

    Also about the 1 post and 25 views, you have to understand that on GR there's alot of dicks on here that like to only be commented on
    they'll just look and then leave the thread, it's sad but that's how some people are or they're beginners and don't know how to help you.

    but change the blurring, and move your name from the black stripe that should be blurred and add it somewhere else.
     
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    the blurred transition is a little too quick on that black tape thing.
     
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    I tried to blur it so i could creat some dept. But i messed it up. Thx for the tip Prox. I will keep it in mind ;)
     
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    Yep :D glad I helped <3
     

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