I think it came out quite well also My Critique: - Your sides kind of through off the flow IMO, especially the way you left the sides empty. The green and pink coloring could compliment the signature, but the way you incorparated them into the signature you have the 3 colors divided instead of working together to create an effect that could improve the signature as well. - The text is decent, but it's a little to much, it's basically a sentence usually you don't do that unless a signature is centered around text it's self. For me the text was more of a distraction to your focal point then a lure, I kept moving away from the focal to look at the text. - The bright stroke on the right, the only thing I disagree with that on, is the way you have it go from so bright to having such a dark spot next to it. If you want to keep it dark place an object of some sort there then darken and blur it, just enough to make out some design on it and give it the idea that it's infront of the lighting so the light is on the other side, sort of like my current signature. Hope you post an update
one thing i think really sticks out is that one random wireframe that's kinda goin in an off direction from the rest of that side of the sig. stupid little nitpicky thing for me to notice.
@ hazed - i love your criticism bro you should be a staff judge or something haha thanks a lot i will apply your advice for my next work! thanks everyone else for your help bumpthisfcukerup
The outcome is very cool, the only thing that I am unsure about in this tag is the choice of purple tones to the right when contrasted with the yellow on the left. Also the exposure levels to the right of bee, I think they may be a little to over done.
