Coldplay

I made this sig a few days ago but I decided to redo it because I didn't like the original turn out. I made this for Darth Bob123. Pain.NET as always.

 

it's cool, although hes a singer, i think your focal point, or the point which is in focus should be his face

 

Un-blur the singer and sharpen it a little and it wold look alot better.
Drop the text too.

 

Heh, I can't drop the text, it was a request piece and they filled out a form saying what they wanted on it. So the text will have to stay .

Also, the face was more lit up but I felt it was TOO lit up, I'll have to go back and fool around with the lighting again.

Here's another version I made but didn't submit here, how's it look?

 

Yah the head is still too bright and blurry.
If you are going to keep the text make it less blurry.