Halo Sig

I'm not happy with this piece, but I figured I'd post it anyways. I don't feel that I have enough going on in the piece, but I can decide what I'd want to do to put more into it.

Edit:

I personally like v2 more.

V1:

V2:

 

Its far too blurry which makes it lose all of its focal points. The font is hard to read and my eye is drawn everywhere trying to make sense of the image. Perhaps adding some blue on Master Chiefs side of the image will help bring it together. A positive is that I see the concept you were going for and that seems nice.

 

As stated, way too blurry. Also try to work on colors and making everything blend together.

 

Yeah, I definitely agree that it was too blurry, I knew I'd be revisiting this piece, heh. I'll work on it a bit more later and repost it.

 

ahhhhhhhhhh my eyes!!!!!

 

You really need to get off of paint.net

Do you have aim or msn?

If you do messege me with it so I can hook you up with PS I got a extra copy around here somewhere

 

Here's the edit of the Halo Sig: