What's Up There?

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by ColdTurkey, Oct 4, 2009.

  1. Oct 4, 2009 at 11:56 PM #1
    ColdTurkey

    ColdTurkey Well-Known Member

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    I'm really happy with this outcome, please c&c.

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  2. Oct 5, 2009 at 12:09 AM #2
    birdunit

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    Hot stock.
    Background kinda monotone and blurred. Not very interesting.
     
  3. Oct 5, 2009 at 12:42 AM #3
    ColdTurkey

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    Ok, better?

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  4. Oct 5, 2009 at 1:05 AM #4
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    yep it is better. now i would work on the text
     
  5. Oct 5, 2009 at 1:14 AM #5
    ColdTurkey

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    Tips?

    Text is my weakest link.
     
  6. Oct 5, 2009 at 1:53 AM #6
    birdunit

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    Oh lordy lol i would just make the text maybe fit the theme more. Like an elegant looking font. idk im not great at textbut i can spot where it needs work sometimes
     
  7. Oct 6, 2009 at 3:06 PM #7
    MaLianTePR

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    yeah try some flashy cursive font. hot chick and nice piece
     
  8. Oct 7, 2009 at 1:57 PM #8
    Strykor

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    Depth man. :>
    Use some twirly thingy c4d renders around that stock. :>
     
  9. Oct 7, 2009 at 7:58 PM #9
    Mxsuperfly

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    I really like it. Not much to hate, if you know what I mean. ;)
     

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