Vinelights

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by Papermache, Sep 26, 2009.

  1. Papermache

    Papermache Well-Known Member

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    My Laotm entry. Criticism only please.

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    Very cool looking, im not exactly sure what it is though. I would suggest smoothing out the lines that connect the lights (or dots, lol) so it would blend in more to the background, but like I said, im not sure what I'm looking at so you are probably going for that kind of detail.
     
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    i like the whole idea u are dealing with there it's very unique. the colours of the lights and the vines are really matching. but the only thing i have to say imo is that to me it's lacking a little bit of depth in it. once you've fixed that it's perfect. anyways cheers mate, good job :)
     
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    Agreed with both. This was a much different piece in the beginning, only near the very end did it turn into this. The lines are actually meant to be hard, but I can see how they could be frustrating and annoying. If I have time I'll try reworking this one, thanks for the crit guys.
     
  5. Sanity Penguin

    Sanity Penguin My sex is on fire

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    Love the texting and lighting, but like n3wb1e mentioned; it's lacking some depth.

    I mean, there's a lot of good lighting going on, but I'm missing some shades to add to the depth.
    Also, as always, great choice of colours.
     
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    Its flat, like said before. I think that changing some of the colors would help a bit, because it kind of just looks like blue, blue, blue and nothing really pops out.
     

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