Inspire Beauty

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  1. Retox

    Retox Well-Known Member

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    alright, few versionssss..

    V1: no text

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    V2: text that kinda ruins it..

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    V3: messing around but its actually kind of cool looking in my opinion

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    v4: kind of a halfway point between the topazed and not..

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    C&C welcome and always appreciated

    Edit: V4 added</div>
     
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    Sanity Penguin My sex is on fire

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    I prefer V1. Love the background with the C4ds and I like the flow in it. Maybe tone down the C4d's colour near her knee there though. That seems a bit too bright for the rest.

    Not fond of the text in V2 and V3 is overtopazed imo :)
    But nice sig.
     
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    Alright I will tone that C4D down because im with ya on that one, and yeah V3 definitely is i still like it though.. its the only thing ive ever used topaz for haha.
     
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    I prefer V1 i don't really like the text in V2 and in V3 i also like the effect but it gives a frownish impression on the render. Anyhow its very nice
     
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    thank ya sir.

    haha never noticed, but youre right the expression on the girls face does kinda change to more of a frown haha.. thanks though dude.
     
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    added a V4 too, ehhhhhhh.
     
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    Version 1 works best for me, the text just is a little over distracting in the second.

    Good job man.
     
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    thanks dude, text is definitely something I gotta work on.. just thought id give it a shot.

    appreciate the comment man.
     
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    Well, V4 looks a lot better now than V3. But I'm still tempted to go with the initial one. I'm just not that into Topaz I suppose :D
     
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    the last 2 you just filtered. so i have no comment on them

    as for the first one, try to fix your sense of depth.
    try blurring part of the bg a bit.
    the flow of your tag is all over the place.
    to many sharp edges.

    but i love the textures you have in the bg though.
    just my two sense, you don't have to follow it but
    it will only help. :)
     
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    haha yeah I can understand that, V1 is still probabbbly my favorite but I do like how the effects in some spots just seem to be a continuation of her little dress thing.. I didnt even know what topaz was 2 days ago I just kept hearing the word.. I'm not really into it either, but you can get some pretty cool outcomes with it.

    I don't completellyyy agree with some of the things you said, regardless thanks for the critisism.. and its hard to say it without sounding like a complete jackass that corrects people, cause usually, thats not me and I hate the jackass that does; but it is "my two cents" not "sense".. I feel kinda like a douchebag, but thank you i apologize and youre welcome AT THE SAME TIME.
     
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    I loveeee the flow of the piece all together, the effects are awesomely awesome (Yay for redundancy!)
     
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    hahah thanks a lot dude.
     

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