Wandering Eyes ~

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by logic., Sep 22, 2009.

  1. logic.

    logic. Well-Known Member

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    Tried to do some smudging again, and im fairly happy with my results.

    CnC!

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    [​IMG] v3
    Edited some minor things, replaced text(kinky is my nick on alot of other forums, wont bother editing :P)
     
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    I like it, just the effect in here face (around the nose) looks weird.
     
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    Looks pretty good, I'd like to see a version with a little more texture tho, maybe just add some sharpened areas. Prefer the placement of the text in v1 and I'd remove the bit on the left next to the border, it doesn't really add anything and looks out of place imo.
     
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    Remove the border? Or the smudge next to it? :P
     
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    [​IMG]

    That bit :D
     
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    very nice smudge job :)
     
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    the smudging to the left is very cool
     
  8. logic.

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    Thanks for the comments :D

    I tried some new things:

    Unsure if it looks better or worse :/

    And i removed the border, and tried to do some better text, i'll keep on working on the text though, since imo it still sucks :(
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    your smudging is great here, and idk if anyone else agrees, but with your side border,i think it would look better if you took a part out of the blue section.other than that, it looks great and text looks pretty good too.maybe play with some fonts?
     
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    3 is definitely my favorite. The text is in the right place and that boarder is gone XD. This is one of those pieces that look better without a boarder.

    Keep up the good work!
     
  11. logic.

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    Yeah i've tried playing with the fonts, but with no luck :/
    I think the new version(i'll upload later, i just removed some gradient maps) will be the final version though.
     
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    Final version.

    C&C is still appriciated ;)
     
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    The colours are great.
     

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