the text looks pretty good, but if you put the word wars underneath halo, and strethced it out so that it's the same width as "halo", i think it would look a lot better. the tag itself looks great. good color scheme. everything blends together nice, and the transitions are smooth. no rough edges or anything. light sources are good too. nice work
Like the one without the text best, Your text in the first just seems big and bulky. Like the colors too.