the break dancer on the bottom right looks totally unnecessary to me. The starburst and other effects around the wheel don't look that great. Also the DJ and Headphones on the front bumper just look weird. The grill looks like you just took a Sound brush leveler and put it on soft light and the shine on the headlight looks really artificial. That's basically my analysis. Good colors on the sig and good positioning with the photo.
Well put. But i dont mind it.... its bold and standsout... just not captivating. might crop up nice as a avatar.
ImageShack - Keep talking guys... I'm trying to learn... Also, off topic, I re-installed my system and lost my bookmarks, can somebody tell me the GFX forum which had the section 'vBattle' in it? It had a teal look and Some 'toxic' signs rotating on the home page, mostly the Admin was DRaveN. Thanks ahead =]
I have to agree with the guys up top. I'd quote em, but why keep repeating what they've said. try to find the focal point of the image or graphic, and make sure that everything else accents that. the breakdancer in the bottom right only pulls away from the focus, and therefore it seems really out of place. the starburst on the tire seems out of place too. The brushing on the headlight doesnt compliment the focus, since you're kinda all over the place with the breakdancer and the startburst. the brush could be effective, but it just needs a little bit of work. the equalizer seems a little bit misplaced, and if you could match it up with the grill some more i bet it would look a lot better. you've got a lot of potential right now, and you're definitely off to a great start. just work on pulling all of the smaller elements together and in to their place so that they all seem to fit together and flow. keep up the good work!
