Dead Space

Done for a client - he wanted it gloomy/subtle. He also wanted it 450x150.



v2



Feedback pls o pls. ^_^

 

too much dead space on the right.

 

Not a fan, I think the render sticks out far too much, it's not really integrated in my opinion. I also agree about the dead space.

 

added v2.

 

the one other thing that I see, is a lack of depth. which I should've mentioned before, other than that delightful!

 

Render color is a sharp contrast to everything else. Would be nice to see it in black and white with hints of blue.

:lol:

 

Aight thanks for the feedback guys
I'll try to come up with a version 3, although the client already bought it and was happy with it I might just leave it how it is

 

Added a v2

 

I agree too much dead space on the Right

v.2 is better but a blue photofiltr whould do good

On the Right Side add some Subtle looking Text as that might spruce it up

 

good

 

Thanks guys And I was trying along the lines of text, but couldn't find anything good =[

 

LOVE V2. Countless times better and sexy as Tricia Helfer. Great job, great signature. You should definitely make it your current.

 

woot <3

 

badump

 

I really love the effects on the back on the render. Great job )b !!