well... I don't like the text right away. I think it makes it look corny. But I can tell you have a grungy style and I just don't have that, so I'm not really qualified unless to say I like it or not. But either way, I think the focul is hard to find as well. Keep at it now and lets see some more.
i feel like its incomplete. you deff need to work on the text more and add more color, its monotone. i do like the border and the blending of the render tho keep it up!
It's not too bad The text needs work, and it's a little plain Bonus points for Bring Me The Horizon :]
