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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by TimSimm2, Aug 21, 2009.

  1. Aug 21, 2009 at 9:42 AM #1
    TimSimm2

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  2. Aug 21, 2009 at 10:52 AM #2
    [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    Good flow and blending. I don't know if that stream on his arm is neccessary.
     
  3. Aug 21, 2009 at 2:28 PM #3
    Strykor

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    I would erase that stream but just lower his hand.
    The one on his hand is awe. :)
    Nice Tag anyway, could need some more depth.
     
  4. Aug 21, 2009 at 4:09 PM #4
    TimSimm2

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    thanks for the comments
     
  5. Aug 21, 2009 at 4:48 PM #5
    Ikuzo

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    Flow is ok but the render totally kills the whole sig. It looks like you've rushed it a little and the text might aswell not be there. 5/10
     
  6. Aug 22, 2009 at 11:05 PM #6
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    It's a little plain
     
  7. Aug 23, 2009 at 5:11 PM #7
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    I wonder, is there any chance that you'll share that render?
    Also, love the signature.
     
  8. Aug 23, 2009 at 7:49 PM #8
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    Wow, great flow and composition! Everything is spot on. But the text seems to throw off the flow, but not to bad. All in all I really don't have much criticism to give you. Nice one!
     
  9. Aug 23, 2009 at 9:11 PM #9
    MaLianTePR

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    needs some more depht and better flow. also the text is kinda slapped on
    you do have a good idea in mind, you just need to execute it better

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