There is one tiny thing which I do not like at all. That blue stroke over the render near the corner. Make it orange please. ^^ Apart from that, the lighting is pretty good the flow is great but I think it is kidna too sharp at some parts, the sword is really too sharp and the text is impossible to read.
Yes, now I would change the text a little bit and maybe blur the parts which are too sharp. Like the sowrd a little bit.
