My First Double Subject Rendered Sig...

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  1. Baiternader

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    CNC?

    Okay: Here is V2 [​IMG]
     
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    The lighting is nice. ^^ You kinda played with that big gun and the lighting of the other render ^^ Sweet.
    But somehow the middle is too "soft". Make some breaking line and a grunge text or something over it, it would
    look so much better.
     
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    I appreciate that, strykor, I had received other complements from another friend of mine, about the color blend...

    :D
     
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    The Lighting is good, but it looks a bit over sharpened in some spots. and Agreed with the middle being a little off. but nice job.
     
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    thanks...
     
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    I like it, but I think there are a few problems. There is too much empty space in the middle. You should work on the text and make it horizontal. Right now, you are just using it to take up space. The copy of the Master Chief to the left of the main one should be less visible. Right now it just doesn't look right to me. The background behind the text is too plain, in my opinion, so you could work on that.

    Other than my C&C, it is a nice sig. :D

    ~T9
     
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    Thanks 9th, I appreciate that...:D

    But... my first true double rendered siggy lol
     
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    No focal point, poor blending, over contrasted, text is terrible, and size doesn't work.

    Ideally you should never make a "double subject" sig. Unless you're an expert in composition, blending and lighting, it doesn't work. Cut this sig down the middle and you might have 2 passable sigs, but as it is it's just plain terrible.
     
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    Just a question, which version?
     
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    V2^^
     
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    Thanks again Strykor :D
     
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    I prefer the second.
    But I dont like the result, the lights are good, but I only see some layers duplicated, and the renders..
    :/
    effects not much,
     
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    Thanks Nanda, the 'copied layers' or so to speak are meant to mirror the original render, the color schemes include standard colors, rendered clouds and a blue C4D
     
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    Second one is much better overall. Seems as though a giant "VS." in the middle would fit the image well.
     
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    I would agree... BUT, that would be the COD4 VS Halo 3 for Xbox I would have to do the 'VS' for... thank you
     

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