Unseen

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the nickname text is bothering me but idk where to place it and what kind of effects i should use..but anyway, c/c please </span>

 

For a second sig ever, that's a pretty nice tag!

 

thank you! more comments please, so i know what i can work on, thanks

 

Work on flow, you can use c4d effects or something and work on the depth by using a background of a stock or something. ^^
You see, there are many opportunities with that "something" because you mainly can do all that you want, but with such a render and
that concept do not use a quite plain background. ^.^

Sweeeet! for a second tag, really.

 

Really good for a second.
Neeeds more flow.

 

I like it a lot. The colors are great and the 'Unseen' text is cool. Work on the name though.
The focus is cool and everything is radiating from the center. Great second tag. =D KIU