Simple but okay. I would lighten the right side of it a little bit up. Maybe with a big soft brush in the corner. Get some more contrast in it and maybe some other colors. Like this it just looks simple and might a little boring. I would make the canvas a little bigger, too so that it would be able to see the full head, like this it looks a bit strange. ^^ However, nice for a new start.
Its not a new start though =/ I was goin for a simple look on this. and i feel the top right is too bright as is.
Sorry lol. I had my light of the monitor very down that is why I did not notice it was bright already. Well, I meant as for a re-start not as a new start. Fine, then just leave the lighting as it is.
Dunno is it just me but render seems LQ, and with text that big you should move it closer to focal so it doesn't draw attention, like overall look of it aswell as the text fonts, good job.
it looks fine except for the left side of the render is glowing and should be darker to match the lighting
