K'naan Abcs

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by pianoman0723, Aug 2, 2009.

  1. Aug 2, 2009 at 11:06 AM #1
    pianoman0723

    pianoman0723 Well-Known Member

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    My first in like months...inspired by K'naan's song "ABCs." Let's see if I'm still at least a little bit decent...

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  2. Aug 2, 2009 at 3:27 PM #2
    dope2k9

    dope2k9 The Tut Dude ;)

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    Colorful. Depth is missing a bit.
    Overall nice.
     
  3. Aug 3, 2009 at 12:53 PM #3
    Robin

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    im sorry man, but that's just too simple, it needs more depth and flow. colors are nice tough
     
  4. Aug 7, 2009 at 3:50 PM #4
    Strykor

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    Yep, the colors are nice, but I think that is it.
    I like the font neither.
     
  5. Aug 7, 2009 at 4:32 PM #5
    Herinjo

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    Agree with above, it's just too simple, needs more work, keep it up.
     
  6. Aug 7, 2009 at 6:11 PM #6
    SupermanGTR

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    The coloring is nice, its just so plain. I would think about making the text just a tad bit darker also.
     

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