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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by strikecobra1, Jul 24, 2009.

  1. strikecobra1

    strikecobra1 Well-Known Member

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    okay.. So Idk I was going like all out on this, somewhere along the layers I F'ed up. :rolleyes:

    Now lately Im not sure whats been wrong, but I can't keep nice color, nor good flow. im trying to advance into more difficult signatures, but I feel like I don't know where to look :x .

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    I know theres so much going wrong in these, I think my issue with colors was choice of C4D's and the fact that I didn't adjust there colors much. Anyways some critique and hopefully I can blast back with some better stoof :( .
     
  2. C-Biscuit

    C-Biscuit Well-Known Member

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    Try playing with contrast and the color balance
    But it looks nice, just that the contrast is a little low
     
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    The bottom by the dragon looks pretty oversharpened. I like this sig a lot though, That's probably a pretty hard render/stock to work with.
    Try blurring something at the bottom to take the focal off the effects. Definitely sharpen the dragon too. The text looks like you know what you're doing a little, but when you make those little things under it with letters and stuff (LOL) make it a much smaller size. Actually trymaking the text a smallersize altogether. Lastly, add a small light source to the top rightish of the sig so the lighting looks more believable.

    Keep working, you'll have a 10/10 in no time. (;

    7/10.
     
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    I think they are both fine aside from the low contrast. I like the colors on the second one.
     
  5. strikecobra1

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    Thanks Guys, ill have a new signature up later hopefully with with a better result :D
     
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    Yeah, I quite like the first one actually, the second could use some work as they already said ;)
     

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