Black Lagoon

So, tried to go back into PS with the stuff i learned from the last tuts and tried my own thing a little, but dunno about the outcomes. So please comment and tell me what to improve! Big thx in advance!

Revy v1


Revy v2


Revy+Balalaika


so gogo comment btw i wonder how i always end up with red as a dominant colour in my sig...

 

all the sparks to the right of the revy one seem to draw me away from the focal point

 

so, would be better if i erase all sparks that are top right area of the sig?

gogo plz more comments. if its really bad say so!! and tell me what to improve! thx

 

the probs i see with this sigs is that there's a lot of free space left on the sides. Try to use some c4d's maybe or some more brushes, like in the third one.

Also the second and third ones seems to be oversaturated with one colour. My advice would be to not use such strong hue/saturation layers and gradient maps, use them with "soft light" or "lighten" blending modes so that they would give slight and increase in saturation, and use warm colours with this, because the render is a bit dark in overall and when you use bright red colour to overlay it just doesn't match imho.

Keep practicing

 

thx chester, i'll try with the next ones

 

try erasing some of them but not all of them make it subtle and draw you to the focal point

 

Flourish tut Nice outcomes thought.

 

actually this time i just used some stuff from each tuts, and didn't just follow one, so i did my own thing i would say