Image seems low quality and the light source seems a bit forced. Also the text could use work and not too sure about that overlayed strip at the bottom.
I appreciate your effects They're very well put together. The only thing you need to work on is your backgrounds now, your light to dark ratios are to quick, notice on the left side of your tag the light brown color goes from light to pitch black, in certain lightings this might be exceptable but thats rare. In this tag I would say you should have a more solid background, the effects tell a story but the background is just a empty space. Also personally I think you should just get rid of the text, everytime you do a signature mess around with text to try and find a good look, but most of the time text can either make or break a tag, completely ruin a tag or make a tag look extremely better. In this case I'd say leave it out for now, I'm not saying your horrible at it just text is a very hard and delicate part of a tag, even when you have a perfect signature text is still a hard thing to apply even now I have a hard time with even my text, every now and then you'll get a text that just snaps into place with the signature, but when you can't get that perfect text it's better to just leave it out and work on it later. For that overlay line, it's drawing attention so if thats what you want people to look at then by all means keep it, but personally I'd rather people be looking at your effects and focal point. So you should probably get rid of it. But in this tag, you have a good sense of lighting and effects. Nice job keep posting I'd like to see an update to this tag if your going to work on it more <3
you really got me there! well im really having a hard time when it comes to text... and thanks to this comments so i can adjust to do's and dont on making a tag... ill try to apply the pointers u guys give me. thanks again..
Like I said text isn't easy I still have a hard time with it, and most of the time I come to find it looks better without it. Another thing about text is, your art doesn't need a title people will always look at it different then you and anyone else, and have there own ideas, so sometimes titles are just pointless anyways . But when I can get one in that looks good you bet I do I'm glad I helped though can't wait to see your next work of art
The lighting is too strong. and the backround doesn't match to the render. but the effects are nice. For fixing the backround problem, you can add photofiller.
