Strike---sprite

When you strike, strike with force to disrupt the ground itself, cuz' the silence..
Well after the good comments from my first sig in 2 years, i attempted to take a shot at style i have not done since it was a fad 4 years ago.
N" its a sprite!!! Tell me what u guys think,
Not to sure on this one i love the text but feel its a bit crowded

contrast up---

 

love the text but ur focal is not clear and text is making it dual focal

 

It's very messy, and blurry around the focal point.
your text blends perfectly, which is the problem with such a messy focal point.
if you can sharpen it and add some color, it would look loads better

 

i can only see what the sprite is because i've seen it before, i cant imagine someone who hasnt being able to distinguish what it is.
The effects are nice, despite being a little over-chaotic.
The colours of the text, and the calm of the right side of the tag make it very unbalanced.

 

try to make the render a LITTLE bit more visible, other then that, i love everything about this sig.