Kind of blinding. I'm not too crazy about the text either... Try determining a light source and then darkening the other parts. That will also help define a focal because my eye is wandering all over the place. Keep it up, I like the idea a lot
Yeah.. It's pretty horrible. Text doesn't fit, it's all the same colour, and there's nothing to it. Also, regarding your sig, your 'recent work' seems to just be pics of women with 'Brandon' stamped across their tits? I don't see the work there.