The One (Remix) Mary J Blige ft. Drake & Xiouu (Chorus) Verse 3 (Drake): ”Uh huhhh, okay I got these girls slight hype, only thing off right now like a night light. While my brother Wayne rockin’ out like a White Stripe, I’mma kill the game, I’m the Young Money White Knight. (yeah) Plus I’m lookin’ for the right type, cautious of a flood so I always lay the right pipe. West put me on the Marquees flight life, plus I go hard for the women that I might wife. I put the ring on the index finger, so if you wanna keep ya girl please don’t bring her. I bet that I’m the type of guy she gotta thing for, and you would block me but this aint Jenga, (yeah) and she’s someone I would work with. That’s what I can tell from what she’s showin’ on the surface, I aint sayin’ I’m requestin’ anyone thats perfect, but I just need a woman that’ll make it all worth it.” (Chorus) Verse 4 (Xiouu): Alright, I’m sorry for the inconvenience. My creative part pulled me to create this sequence. Drizzy said a bunch of things that got your mind bent, So I’m swag-surfin’ on a wave that the tide sent. I may have said some things that maybe I have not meant, But baby I aint perfect cause my name aint Clark Kent. My words are never exaggerated. I got people throwin’ ---- because I’m so hated. But their constant hate is why I’m motivated I’ll be the head of the show like Stalin, dictated. I’m cooking up things need to get the cheese grated. Your career is much like my jeans; washed out and faded. Focus on the right things is what I gotta do, I’ll be a good boy for snacks, call me Scooby-Doo. And if you heard I’m losin’ then it really aint true. I got the rap game in a choke-hold fully subdued. Hope you like. Bored in Period 2 class.
I've got better lyrics, lol, this was just a fun thing to do matching Drake's style. White guys can't rap? Nobody's rapping inverse. Are you ALWAYS wrong? Anybody can do poetry and write rhymes. Blacks, whites, asians, hispanics, etc, don't be a retard.
It wasn't poetry, it was clearly in at least a "Rap" style. Though I don't quite understand why you desperately slipped as many 'pop-culture' references in there as you could; Scooby Doo, Jenga, Clark Kent etc.
Rhyming does not automatically make it poetry. What you wrote sounds like you're trying to get you some ghetto booty. Maybe if you were actually recording your rap songs, rather than just writing down boring repetitive rhyming sentences, we'd have something that would make you seem like less of a faggot, ya hear. 99% of good rap is in the presentation.
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Don't ------ing insult me, what the ------ is your problem? Honestly, you're ALWAYS on my back with nothing but negativity, I'm sick of it. I mean, at least Broken has questions AGAINST it, that aren't ------ing insulting me. Broken Drake is a rapper and his verse I didn't right, obviously. But my verse is "Xiouu" and it would come in after his. The reason i used Pop-Culture in it, is because that's the kinda way Drake writes and rhymes. Sometimes, if a rapper makes a song, and people write and record a remix, it is relevant, or in the same fashion and style as the original. And you're right inverse, a lot of rap doesn't have the BEST lyrical vocabulary, but the concept, the story it tells, the delivery, and the flow make it nice for people to hear. I didn't post this as, "MY SONG LISTEN HERE." So please, get off the negative ----. Thank you MP. You can obviously see I'm not OMG ------ING SRS BSNS WITH RAP GAME and I'm just playin' round. Damn.
If you post it, they will come. You need to realise that on the internet, forums in particular, people are always going to be critical to the point of ... debasement and insults. Read what they have to say, take from it what you can and leave it be, don't bother responding. While it may seem the "-----" thing to do, it's probably the smartest choice. Just let it all go by. I can't write poetry for ----, and I don't bother. I have a lyricist for me, though. It's good to have hobbies and to do things "for fun." Don't let insults impede your own creativity, even if you aren't serious about it.
