Personally, I do like what you were going for, but T.I. is way to big IMO. I feel the text but something about it just isn't right, idk what exactly but something doesn't feel right. I do like the idea behind it, work on it a little bit more. Like add a few changes, mess around with the size a little, and post a V2. Hope I helped a little
It's not so much the size of him that 'bothers' me, but he's too blurry imo, especially to the left there. Also, ditch the line alongside the text
I think that if the line was ditched it would be more empty. Same goes for the text. If you maybe wanted to change it about, experiment with some other colours too, like adding green to it.... but I'm no expert. Otherwise, I think it's really nice. =)
