Can we see it in colour also? Can't really give much criticism without seeing it. As for now I'd move the text, not great where it is now.
i originally had it in color and thought it looked better in black n white, but ill post it up in a second
color looks alot better then B&W the text in color is kind of hard to read, maybe its just cause i dont have my glasses on =X but i like it 9/10
Guys are you just looking for excuses to criticize? Who care's about the god damn text, it's blended in on purpose. I personally prefer the black and white version - it's more dramatic ^^
he needs criticism to get better? :| kill the text, right side colours dont flow with the sig, lessen the glow