*update*bmw Site Design

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  1. Jun 1, 2009 at 8:03 AM #1
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    Design in itself is great but I have to agree with you on the menu. Looks add there actually.
    I'd simply go for a simple menu below that part, would work better.

    Love the bottom part, great flow and I really like the carbonfiber feeling :)
     
  3. Jun 1, 2009 at 9:30 AM #3
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    just my criticism.

    It's a nice concept but poorly executed from my view. The BMW logo seems way to blended it. I would of liked it if that popped out more than the menus actually. The whole body looks choppy and not very clean. And I don't like the menu at all.
     
  4. Jun 1, 2009 at 10:06 AM #4
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    After looking at it again, I noticed what RN said and I have to agree. It's a nice concept, just needs to be redone.
     
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    hmm i see ur point after another look i see what u mean :) i'll work on a v2
     
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    v2
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  7. Jun 2, 2009 at 1:09 AM #7
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    way better. however, what is the size of that website?... It looks small, its compressed on GR right? Only thing I have to pick out is the sides look bland compared to the rest of the website. Now you got that nice looking header and logo. But the body seems just like a blur. And the images on the bottom look meh, but I know it's actually not the easiest thing to make those simple images look nice.

    btw love the header, and for the body you need more of a metallic kind of look with it than a blur. or something else that has some more stuff going on than what you have now.
     
  8. Jun 2, 2009 at 4:43 AM #8
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    yea i suck at making content XD

    and i tried to make the body sides more sharp or hard or however its called. but i failed hard :P so i'll leave it like this and work on my next template :D
     

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