nice tag, def v.2 , id actually drop the typo bout 10 pixels and make it 1 or maybe 2pts smaller also that way its not stealing focal, also add a energy type ball on end of weapon and increase the lighting on his face, chest and foward arm, besides that its a nice tag
second one is fire, grat work i love the render great find, effects and flow is perfected too. good work!
I liked the "flames" things behind deadpool in the 2nd one but I like the particles (lower right) in the first better.