covered the render waay too much. try and arange that effect around the render (like your other sig ). after that, the sig will look really good. plus im not fan of the border
thx for the comments, Uhm whats grainy and thanks jimmy I like that sig too but on this one it would defeat the effect I was trying to get if I re arrange the effects around the render. I don't like white borders either but I think a b lack one you might not see on this one.
I dont see grain but your focal is disrupted with effects, never cover the main focal point with alot of effects, also offset compo just a lil bit..
