Hayley Williams

This is my first thing I'm posting here. I made it a while ago. As a small side story. Hayley Williams has actually seen it and commented on it, this alone makes it special to me.

 

text needs to be worked on. same with lighting and the smudging is pretty off at points. also delete that little orange thing on the left.

plus you need more sense of flow.

other than that good sig

 

So everything that could go wrong went wrong?

 

where did she see it? it justlooks like some ugly distorts

 

You need to work on your color transfer.
It goes from orange to black instantly you need to have a color transfer from the bright to the dark.

Also work on your lighting source.

Your render is to small for the tag as well. It should be one of the parts of the tag that fill it the most.
or for this signature shorten the height of it. Cut off the top of the tag and it'll fit much better.

Use a different font style and don't set it to overlay. and if your going to add a boarder don't use
that boarder style usually doesn't fit to well. =\