i really need to understand how i can get better with this tag its for a battle, so please comment http://i43.tinypic.com/29db8yc.png [better on white]
well you got the concept of depth, and focues. which is good, but also the there are the lights i nteh sigs especially the yelloish part in the middle that makes the sig confusing. And the text also needs some modifications. It feels out of place.