Planets Collapse

Another lp manip. I really like this one and I hope you all do too.

http://spraynwipe.deviantart.com/art/Plane...lapse-121273610

 

Very nice, I love it. The Big planet needs work though.

 

lighting seems a little forced but apart from that it looks pretty sweet. LP > tag version

 

Thanks for the comments.

 

Okay I know double post, but I've changed the thing almost completely, the planet I remade should look better and I went for a little different theme, more of an apocalyptic one at that.
Check it out and share your thoughts!

 

Planet is much better.. But the perspective of the meteor and smoke is way too big for the overall size of it. So make that bit much smaller and try giving the planet an impact around where the meteor hits it

 

Yeah I'm having trouble making the impact look right. Any ideas?

 

You can try this lol
http://baro.deviantart.com/art/Impacts-Tutorial-28492201

With some combination of smudging

 

Lmao interesting. I'll see about it in a matter of days. Thanks dude.

 

I can't say that I'm fond of it. I like the concept and all, but it looks a little strange. Seems to me like everything is just pushed into the canvas. Some things are too bright, some are too dark. etc etc.

But it could be great with a bit more work.

 

What Ren said, it needs more work.

 

mmm i liked the older version much better. colours dont fit.

 

Well I completely re-did it again, I've had enough of this and you guys probably won't like it but I tried hard to make it appealing. I won't be changing this any further.

 

Looks a lot better tbh.

 

ya a lot better and no need to always listen to our suggestions lol. If you were happy with it you didnt have to change it