Gun Grave

i really need to understand how i can get better with this tag
its for a battle, so please comment


http://i43.tinypic.com/29db8yc.png

[better on white]

 

well you got the concept of depth, and focues.
which is good, but also the there are the lights i nteh sigs especially the yelloish part in the middle that makes the sig confusing.
And the text also needs some modifications.
It feels out of place.

 

very cool sig, its just the flash of yellow in teh middle looks wierd.

 

too bland needs some bettter eeffects/lighting