thanx for the insight there broken this piece inspired me to make a sweet avi for myself lol and proli will even run off into a nice elegant siggy keep the comments coming guys its really helping me out alot.
ok the final decision is in my instructor loved the new colors suggested and that is what im working on now im going to be updating this thread soon and passing a pm to all of the participants in this lengthy review so far cause im taking down all the logos and showing only the logo being used and then displaying the products I have to make with that logo. these products contain a letterhead, envelope mock up, business card, t shirt design, and a promotional prouct in my case of being a high end fashion shop i chose to do a pin that would maybe be placed on a blazer.
Looking good. Only two things now really. Think the logo on the letterhead might well be too light, not sure it'd show up at all in printing. You can either darken it a bit to make it just a bit more clear, or darken it a lot and put it smaller in the corner. Secondly I'm not really sure on the font for "High Octane Clothing" etc., just, not a fan of it, might well just be personal preference.
the font has to be consistent ith the same font used to type the 93 on the logo and the logo has to be centered like that on the letterhead as it is the design my professor signed off on and told me to render on the computer. I will definetly try printing it darker
thanx loads guys i present these renders to my instructor on Monday to get a final sign off before they hit the print press and get prepped for my wednesday presentation..... nervous as to what will happen. This is a real company and he said that the companies we are mocking up for have been known to pluck the really good ones and use them as their real stuff also two internships are on the line :S
This. A lot has changed since I was in here last haha. I'm liking the new logo a lot, the colours go well. Props to Broken for colour choice! The font is a little plain, but whatever. My favourite piece out of the whole lot is the business cards, they look very -----! Congratz. Please post how you went with the designs! =)