<div align="center">Ok here it is the complete package ready to go let me know what you guys think my teacher signed off on all of my thumbnails and approved the logo with the colors suggested by Broken thanx Broken! it im proved the overall package drastically. Ok to start off here is the logo in full color and in b&w. I showed my professor the two different colors firstly the ones i chose which he really liked and then the ones ones that Broken suggested and he was amazed at the improvment of the overall design he said it made the logo itself look well educated and extremely elegant and sophisticated. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Next we have the front and back views of the envelope. The envelope is a Standard Postage #11 Policy Envelope ------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Next, The letterhead... the front has the logo placed in the center in the page and enlarged to cover most of the page but still leaving adequate space along the outer edges and is faded way back so that the person using it can still write on it or print a typed letter. The back appears to you all as just color and that is just because it is a full bleed color that will be printed onto the back of the paper. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Next is the business cards. The front of the business card is where i decided to contain all of the information at. The back of the card is a full bleed color and has the logo scaled down and floated to the right in the same position as it is on the front of the card as this is not going to be just the logo as you all are seeing it is going to be a die cut where that section does not exist. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------- And finally the T-shirt design. The design is very very simple but this is effective in this situation because it is a high end clothing company. this shirt is meant to be worn by staff as well as be sold as a specialty item for a limited time. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------- There it is the complete package designed and ready for print. minus a mistake i noticed on the front of the letter where there i a 1 px red line that goes down the side right under the logo. Thanks again for all of the extremely helpful criticism and suggestions and I ask you once again to please review this again as this is the finished product as the other was merely a stepping stone. </div>
Looks amazing! I don't think there should be any changes... I really am not a fan of the pinkish/purple one tho...
Ok, i'm not really good at making logo/banner/stuff like that... but here is what I think... I think it is pretty good. Maybe add some small flourist work around the "+". Around the bottom and top left and top right. Just to give it more of a custom fell. Anyways, good job!
ok i re rendered it basing it around a similar shape base but adding a bit extra to it..... changed the font of the 93 and took premium out of the logo since a plus sign mean going up, top of the line, premium, etc..... and i two toned it thus solving my color issue and creating what I learned in design to be called color vibration with the sharp colors. ***well if you can see it then tada but for some dumb reason i havent been able to see it but have been told it does indeed show.....
Far far better looking now than it was. Only issue is with the very bright colours your logo isn't going to show up on bright clothing so you'll need to make a darker version too.
yeah the requirments were it has to also be able to work solely in black and white *******EDIT********* The new one is up and fully working now and is posted in the first post in this thread in full color and in black and white as per my instructors standards to a flexible logo.
Yea I can see your logos. The 2nd batch remind me of Nazi symbols just from the way they flow :S Maybe it's only my eyes seeing this however, haha.
Looks pretty good. But you need to fix the kerning on the main type and adjust the leading on the subtext. Other than that it's real nice work.
the first set of logos was the first draft and is not being used nymore the new selection is the second batch of logos I just left the old ones up so you all can see the progression of the design.
I think maybe making a two toned darker one would work as well, for light clothes where you want colour but also for it to stand out. Maybe a Grey/Dark Red.
taking your words into consideration broken here is a render of the same logo but with the colors you suggested
Maybe darken the grey a bit, but I quite like it like that. If the grey is darker then the red will offset with it quite well. Overall they're all a huge improvement on the original.
