Ehm what did you do..exactly..cause I can only see a stock/render slapped on a black background wit a lil border around the whole thing
Way too plain, you need to change more, add some c4d or an effect of some sort, and make sure to have a main focus to it as well. There's not much going on atm.
It looks like all you did was add a motion blur <.< Sorry, but to me its boring. It's just a stock photo with 1 or 2 filters added to it. It doesn't look like much thought was put into it.
surprise...I actually did it in segments...I messed with the original...made it what is is now, then cut out a section of it, and added another stock with the 2nd stock with glaussian blur and with color resulting in the grayer eyes...oh well, im not great with this. but look at my other thread "Caveman" with a Masterchief render I formatted from a dvd cover.