First LP in a good while.. So check out the LP version. But I personally prefer the tag version Everything looks better smallers imo http://anything-pink.deviantart.com/art/Cr...icles-119727292
Looks sex. Although the lighting seems a bit SUDDEN idk how to explain but yeh .. hopefully you understand what i mean
Need to do something with the bubble, I wasn't aware it was there until I read your stock credit and looked for it. Try make it look 3D or something, bit of shadow on the ground, a highlight around the top of the bubble, anything to make it pop out and make it look like she's inside it. Looks like it's on overlay at the moment. It's nice otherwise, lighting makes sense on both the girl and the forest, though the shadow on her needs changing (shifting to the left) to reflect that. And maybe just to add a little something, add a summoning circle/ring beneath her with glyphs or, whatever people like this do.