Text I like in this case, and good to see you've at least temporarily dropped those huge borders. Not as imaginative or original as yours tend to be though, doesn't look like there's much going on, there's no light source, there's, nothing. Just a bit boring and flat. Think the render's fairly ugly so that probaly doesn't help it but, prefer your older ones. (Y) Not bad like, text is good, and the bit around her left shoulder looks better than the rest, just don't like this brown thing in the background, needs brightening up and general colour work.
