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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by [*uva*], Apr 15, 2009.

  1. [*uva*]

    [*uva*] Well-Known Member

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    I read a tut... this is what i got>.>

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    Trying to work on the basic's...
     
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    Daecu Senior Member

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    you need to work on your depth, your background is really simple. the text also needs work, the color doesn't match anything and its too big and stand out atm.
    lighting is also a problem area, it doesn't come from every direction, but that's what you painted in. light typically comes from 1, maybe 2 directions, you just have to look at the shadows on the render to tell where they are coming from and define the light in that area :)
     
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    Can't read the letters, dont like the whole thing, the white mask isn't doing the sig good
     

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