Menthol

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bump bump bummmmmmmmp

 

I like the main focal and the effect of the cards around it. Good colouring as well but the left just feels a bit empty to me and the right seems a bit too stretched

 

left side looks too empty to me, and the blurring on the right side just looks kinda funny, but I think the tag has potential.
I'd like to see a new version

 

yea true, i probably should have added more, but it was a gift so i'm keeping it as is.

 

good but a bit empty, also the light source is off and it also looks like you have 3, try some dodge and burn to fix that in the future

 

must i have only 1?

 

no, not at all, it really depends on the focal, in this case its some lady where the light should be shining on her face you have to either change that or follow it so the lightning will go with it

 

yes, maybe
but im not trying to make this look real, this is of fantasy
if i would have followed the focal i would have had the light comming from up above, the reason why her face is bright is because i made it as such.