Okay I just made this, I think I'm out of my little ditch now and possibly improved even more. Which is better? I think I'm sticking with v2 though. Oh yeah guys I'm using this for a crew battle on PR, so don't show it to anyone till I say so.
Easily one of your bests.. If you can re-color the guy and make him saturated instead of B/W it'll look a lot better