Colourblind

First use of wireframe C4D's.
C&C appreciated.

 

Eh, I'd say it was pretty bad, except I knew it would be the moment I saw "B&W" in the title. Srsly, needs contrast.

 

:\ k.

 

its not all that bad, i like the idea of it, and the background is pretty cool.

good work, keep workin

 

Its too plain/flat for me, Needs some depth added. Also my eyes go toward the plain white area on the left.

Grr Nothing wrong with B&W

 

Aight, thanks for the comments.
Any good tutorials on flow and focal points?

I just don't seem to get the concept all that well...
I have the full sig tutorial, but it wasn't all that great tbh.

 

Yah, I love good black and white tags. The key word there being good. I've seen maybe 10-15 B&W tags ever that were really good.

 

I add depth by blurring and eraseing over focal and then lower the opcity to the background. Work for me just fine.