Bleach

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Alexhoie, Mar 29, 2009.

  1. Mar 29, 2009 at 9:10 PM #1
    Alexhoie

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    be nice to a newbie:)
     
  2. Mar 29, 2009 at 9:33 PM #2
    Daecu

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    It seems a bit too wide for such a thin focal (render), and the sharper version is definitely better. Also, the vertical lines you got going there are throwing off your flow...

    Otherwise its not terrible, keep practicing and keep posting your stuff :)
     
  3. Mar 29, 2009 at 9:46 PM #3
    Alexhoie

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    thanks for reply :)

    v3 done

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  4. Mar 30, 2009 at 10:31 AM #4
    Yurizen

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    v1 looks the best. Add more effects to it.
     

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