I'm not liking how on the left it's blurred ,but then the right is displaced. I think it lost it's qulity with that. Or try and lower the opcity on the blur. And your lighting is off. I like the depth of it though good job on that.
Very very decent man, i love the depth in this tag, and as usual u have made the lighting, typography and effects flow beuatifully... 9/10 if i really had to rate it
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