Abit too blurry for my taste, maybe sharpen the render abit more and leave the bg blurry (an easy way to do this is as follows - make new layer>apply image>Sharpen>erase everything around the render) overall your def improving, keep it up
Haha, the lines above and bottom of the text, My very first creation was sooooooo similar, it's weird. Infact I might still have it. lol I found it, here it is. Pretty gangster, right? But anyways, good job.